Could have had improved art work.
The characters could have had more work done to them though as the way in which they were made, made their faces look bad mostly, but then the bodies, though they had correct proportions were still a bit ugly. You should try using a different pallet for the face and make the features look nicer. I would suggest looking at the Author of the Paladin series latest tutorials, as these could help with this style.
The music though was very good quality, and seemed to have been correctly shrunk to lower the file size. The voice acting on this was very good and clear, there was no breathing or other interference. This made it good to watch through.
The movement was not fractured as it ran smoothly, this was very good, though at some points of walking I think most apparent when he was slinging eggs, the animation could have been improved at places like this.
The artwork was a little to sharp, or blocky, as there seemed to be mostly rectangles etc. of single colours that made up the majority of the flash, you should try and make more with the mouse, for the personal touch. Also you could add gradients to the single colours.
Over all a very good flash, just needed some more time on the art work.
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