The opening was good.
However this was lost at 0:44, the techno style instrument introduced there did not fit in the piece at all, and only made the whole piece worse.
However the circus style theme that came in at 0:16 was good, and this worked well. At 1:53, the plesant sound introduced was very good.
If you re-submitted this with taking out the techno instrument or altering it, then the piece will be much better.